Post by Brokenkit M on Jul 26, 2013 20:00:42 GMT
Hey guys. I was wandering about Leopardclaw's death.
She isin't a very nice cat.
Okay, my idea is this (I'll do it in a RP):
She steped into the forest, as every step she made, she gave a small huff.
Her tail lashed from side to side, as her black ears twitched and her whiskers gave a small vibration.
She titeled her black spotted head, as she closed her yellow eyes, and gave a small sniff.
She scenced a rabbit near by, but she also scenced a twoleg. She gave a small hiss as she spoke: "What does a twoleg doing out here?....Wait a minute....i smell.....Dogs!!" She gave a small hiss, as she backed away, a reamembered thought came into her mind: /"Will you back away? Or will you fight?"\ This two unknown questions came into her mind, as she closed her yellow eyes, and gave a small huff, as she heard out barking. She opened her yellow eyes, as she saw a bush moving. She gave a hiss, as then it was only a rabbit running away. She gave out a small realife huff, as the barking sudely stopted.
She heard out a crack, as she turned to the direction, a dog jumping, as he attacked her.
His big fangs sucked into cranium, she yellowed in pain, as the dog let her go. Another dog just watched her, as she bleed.
She gotten into her paws, as she gave a hiss, but she was abit weak, as the dog who attacked her, pushed her, as the dogs paws were on her back, the dogs who was waching her, when she stood up.
She tride to get out of there paws, as the dogs jaws opened, and her eyes wide out. The dogs jaws sucked into her neack, as from the hard bite, she layied there, blood draining from her neack, as her eyes were open and full of fear. She layied there, as the dogs left her there laying out cold. From her eyes, there was tears falling out, as she was dead.
(Tell me what do you think about my char's death?)
{Sorry if i posted not in the rightful place, but i don't know where to post >.< }
She isin't a very nice cat.
Okay, my idea is this (I'll do it in a RP):
She steped into the forest, as every step she made, she gave a small huff.
Her tail lashed from side to side, as her black ears twitched and her whiskers gave a small vibration.
She titeled her black spotted head, as she closed her yellow eyes, and gave a small sniff.
She scenced a rabbit near by, but she also scenced a twoleg. She gave a small hiss as she spoke: "What does a twoleg doing out here?....Wait a minute....i smell.....Dogs!!" She gave a small hiss, as she backed away, a reamembered thought came into her mind: /"Will you back away? Or will you fight?"\ This two unknown questions came into her mind, as she closed her yellow eyes, and gave a small huff, as she heard out barking. She opened her yellow eyes, as she saw a bush moving. She gave a hiss, as then it was only a rabbit running away. She gave out a small realife huff, as the barking sudely stopted.
She heard out a crack, as she turned to the direction, a dog jumping, as he attacked her.
His big fangs sucked into cranium, she yellowed in pain, as the dog let her go. Another dog just watched her, as she bleed.
She gotten into her paws, as she gave a hiss, but she was abit weak, as the dog who attacked her, pushed her, as the dogs paws were on her back, the dogs who was waching her, when she stood up.
She tride to get out of there paws, as the dogs jaws opened, and her eyes wide out. The dogs jaws sucked into her neack, as from the hard bite, she layied there, blood draining from her neack, as her eyes were open and full of fear. She layied there, as the dogs left her there laying out cold. From her eyes, there was tears falling out, as she was dead.
(Tell me what do you think about my char's death?)
{Sorry if i posted not in the rightful place, but i don't know where to post >.< }